Discussion of "Prelude to Avernus" by ShadowMan

Another winner shadowman!
I really enjoy reading your work. Excellent chapters for other writers to follow-up! So many different ways one could take it...

keep up the awesome work man. I'll keep coming back to read them.

Thanks man, I appreciate the positive comments! I enjoy your stuff very much as well.

Dumb bad luck is all I can say about not seeing this before now! This is an excellent beginning for a novel and fabulous writing!