Discussion of "Minervina's Secret" by SexyWriter83
FaeryQueen 5 years, 9 months ago
Nice turnaround!! Hope to see more of you out there on the circuit!!
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vargasha 5 years, 9 months ago
I was thoroughly impressed by your chapter. It is the first thing I read by you. I think your style of delivery works very well with your subject matter. I like the archaic sentence structure you sprinkle throughout. I try to do similar work, except it is in dialogue form. You should check my stuff out if you have time!
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