Discussion of "Dream Weave (1)" by Sebastienrules

Hi there. Welcome to SM. You mentioned comments about grammar - for most part your grammar is ok, but you might want to check your spelling. Pay attention to that red zig-zag line in Microsoft Word. Easy and clear to read. Looking forward to next chapter ;)

I have to read the next chapter to see what his dreams are telling him.

I never used word for this. I sat down for about half an hour and just typed in the box and rolled with it. Thank you for comments and the next chapter should be done soon. I plan on trying with the next one.

Mr. Grammar and Miss Spelling are in about every story I've ever read. This story so far is like a cliff hanger. It makes you sit on the edge of your seat waiting for the next chapter.
I don't pay to much attention to grammar and spelling right off. Not if I like the story as well as I have yours so far.