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Discussion of "Something Evil This Way Comes" by Savarager


1 writerwannabe 5 years, 7 months ago Reply

Excellent writing, Sav! I truly enjoy this world and your character Shin-Jen, as well as the wonderfully descriptive narratives and realistic dialogue. I'll sure be glad when you publish more because, at the moment, I can't see the big picture...lol.


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1 Ace 5 years, 7 months ago Reply

You've already heard most of my comments and critiques. It'll be hard for you to match the intensity of the chapter with Shan Tu Lek (which is my favourite so far) but this was great. I can't believe the rate that you turn these things out. Especially since you hardly seem to have the time lately! Well done, my friend. *glove bump*


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1 honeygloom 5 years, 7 months ago Reply

I am into this world you're creating that's for sure.
Another great piece. I can't wait to see how everything
fits together. Very well done!


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