Discussion of "The Opportunity" by SassySanders

1		mybeautifuldaydream 1 month, 4 weeks ago Reply So L.A. I like it!
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0		SassySanders 1 month, 4 weeks ago Reply Cool! Thank you!
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0		SassySanders 1 month, 4 weeks ago Reply Cool! Thank you!
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1		dogdeity11 1 month, 3 weeks ago Reply Good start! Nice character development.
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