All Comments by S_Ozdiyre

I find myself reading and seeing many different ways this could go, and I am very entertained with that diverse door. I like your descriptiveness and attention to detail in the scene; I pictured a dark restaurant lit with candles, but then the woman with the child threw me off. "Wait, is this a Denny's?" The errors are minor and not really worth negating a star. Very good work overall! 4 STARS!