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Tommy Sincade  by Ruffion

 My name is Tommy Sincade. Ten days ago I was a different man. Today I'm just a shell of that man. I have no more remorce, no objection to the cruelty expressed towards the criminaly insane. In fact send them to Texas is what I say; now thats a death penalty on the right track.

Ten days ago I found out my wife was pregnant. My dog was hit by a car. Not to mention I was canned at the job. Yeah things cant get worse than this can they. Wrong try being knocked out by a number nine golf iron watching Leno on late night television. Thats the best day I've had in ten days.

I woke up with ears ringing like a freight train full of teenage girls on the way to see one of those boy band sensations. Well you get the picture. 

Aah the note how could I forget.

(We have your wife if you ever want to see her alive again drive to the gully and dont be followed. We've got big plans for you.)

 

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Date created: May 22, 2009
Date published: May 22, 2009
Comments: 6
Tags: 1, chapter, first, my, story
Word Count: 188
Times Read: 752
Story Length: 4
Children Rank: 3.5/5.0 (8 votes)
Descendant Rank: 0.0/5.0 (14 votes)