Hello again for those of you who don't know I am a new writer on sm. I have my very first piece written directly on sm. It's called Tommy Sincade the beginning is lacking a little but the more I write the better it becomes. So take a look and give please give feedback.

This was a turn for the worst I would have never expected. I absolutely loved it, the insanity involved the almost on the right path idea that the husband was in the right and then hes blasting with his shotgun. I love instant action as you can tell with Tommy Sincade.

if you haven't red Tommy Sincade yet I just added a chapter 4. And as always I am open to all feed back.
As well I hope you enjoy read.

Great story I loved the read. He reminds me of the punisher all wrapped up in mystery.

I am new to the writing community my favorite author is Dean Koonts without him I wouldn't be interested in writing. Please give Tommy Sincade a once over Ive posted the first three chapters, and I'm looking for feedback.

If you've made it this far. Please do continue or add on I'm new to story mash. so feel free to leave comments for the better or worse.