Discussion of "The Valley of Stars" by Rishabh9dec

Great descriptions. Could see the scene really well.

thank you
for your comment please help me in continuing the story

@rishabh9dec a very beautifully written story,P.S what is your age

read this kind of a story after a very long time

Thank you Preeti_ab & deepak_mohan for your generous compliments @preeti_ab i am 13 years old :)

WOW!
Ruskin Bond is back!
Well done Rishabh...awesome scenic description and mind blowing imagery!
Keep it up...

You can get some action into the story, give it a good twist..say the yellow flowers were planted by drug cultivators..or some rich people plan to clear out the forest for some construction..

In technical terms this is called a 'conflict' a break from the normal life of the protagonist!

Best of Luck!

Thank You Aman bhaiya
will definetly work to improve the story
Thanks for the twist idea was looking for something like that

a story written by a child fr children.....done rarely.....I'm quite impressed with the detailing be it of the characters or the scenic beauty....keep writing continuously Rishabh without any doubts....this is the time to spread your wings dear....im sure u wl make it big one day....best of luck