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Remus661

Date Joined: Jan. 8, 2008
Last Login: Jan. 30, 2011

7 Comments by Remus661

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1 Remus661 6 years, 9 months ago Context

really good. keep up the story and i'll keep coming back to read.


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1 Remus661 6 years, 10 months ago Context

Hahaha! I love it! I had no idea what you were doing with the story until the very end! Great job!


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1 Remus661 6 years, 10 months ago Context

She's committing suicide and she's drunk at the time [this is from Dostoevsky's "Crime and Punishment"], so I'm assuming that her thought process isn't really all that good. Still, thanks for the comment. I need the feedback.


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1 Remus661 6 years, 10 months ago Context

I'm one to agree with Nate here. The story is excellent, subject matter included. All stories have elements in common [they're called archetypes], but that doesn't mean they're unoriginal. The story was well worded and had good emotional ties. Just because it's on a common subject doesn't mean it's not fresh.

To NateG, I liked your story. You have a good style and a good way with words. Ignore whats-his-name up there. You have talent. Keep writing.

By the way, if I hadn't known this was written by you but I'd heard the story, I would've assumed it was an actual belief on how the universe was created.


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1 Remus661 6 years, 10 months ago Context

Really good! I like your style of writing! Your pace is nice and steady! keep it up!


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2 Remus661 6 years, 10 months ago Context

one of the more grammatically correct pieces of writing I've read thus far. the idea is interesting, but Mary Shelley seems a little...overdone. nevertheless, it's a good start. keep it up!


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1 Remus661 6 years, 10 months ago Context

despite sounding oddly like a recent murder case about a BYU student, it's a good story. Good, cliffhanger, but best of all, good writing style.


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