Discussion of "At The Movies" by Regz
Norcia 1 year, 7 months ago
It's interesting how this is similar to "Heavy Pockets," in the sense that you don't really know what's going on until the last line in the chapter. And with this one, you're still not quite sure, so it has a nice air of mystery that's make me want to read more. Is she throwing up because she's pregnant? Is it his baby or someone else's? What are they both sorry about? I hope you continue it!
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Regz 1 year, 7 months ago
Thanks for the encouragement. I'm sorry if I kind of burst the bubble, but this was mainly a writing exercise I was trying out. The idea is to write about two characters who have secrets from each other and have the audience never know either. So, I'm not entirely sure I will be continuing this one, but anyone is more than welcome to if they so wish.
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