Discussion of "Bloody Knuckle Chuckles" by Regz
Cornelius 1 year, 7 months ago
Excellent! Each character had their own voice. A novel approach. I enjoy how I am riveted to the story while still having very little information about what has actually happened. The father's comment is at once amusing and disturbing, like he is in denial- has to push Charles out of his head, and may have done so habitually. If I get around to mashing this, I might be inclined to insert "Reporter:" for an alternate narrative point of view, sort of a step back, if you will. Nice work in any case.
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Regz 1 year, 7 months ago
Thank you much for the praise. I, too, had the idea of sticking in a reporter in there, but just didn't get around to it. Just wanted this first entry to be the groundwork for the type of story and characters this is. Also, I imagine (hope) this can be quite the interesting mash chapter, it can really go anywhere.
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