Discussion of "Everyone has a story" by RavenLebeau

So, I'm sitting at my desk eating lunch and, as I forgot to get a newspaper, decided to browse SM for some new stories. I remembered that I hadn't checked out your page in a while, so I did and found this jewel! How I missed it before now is mind boggeling...lol. This is fantastic writing, Raven....truly. I loved it.

Thanks! I loved the title "Nuns on Motorcycles"... when I read the chapter, I didn't see much potential, with such an awful protagonist. (Not awful writing, just an unsympathetic character.) I decided to make a satire of it... glad someone enjoyed it :) I had fun, but not exactly a comment magnet.

good flow and structure..