Discussion of "This is not a toy: iv" by RavenLebeau

very cool, captured the brutality i was trying to convey...i wrote a chapter 4 as well...not that yours isn't badass.

Thanks, that's very kind. I actually didn't do a very good job of sticking to your style. I can't seem to put myself in your head :) Your work is unique and interesting. It caught my attention, so I wanted to add something though I knew it wouldn't quite fit.

Thanks! It is as close as i've seen yet, i like the direction where you are heading, continue by all means, i just had one in mind, published then saw this.....

That's what the site is for, right? Taking things different directions :) I feel a little weird jumping into someone else's work, but it's kind of fun to take off on a springboard when I see something I like.

I know what you mean about having stuff if in mind, I have a novel sketched out, debating whether to post more here or not. I have the first four chapters, but very mixed feelings about seeing people mess with it, since of course I "know" how it ends.

just go for it, someone may trigger something for chapter 5, just like before was something i came up with about 2 years ago, but got stuck, and the person that added...did way better than i could!

Ah, well, I have all the chapters. But it may be interesting to see what people dream up from what's here. I don't want to close the door on doing the Amazon publishing thing just yet, but I may change my mind. Right now, I've been having fun adding odd things to other people's work :) This site pays better than Helium.com from what I can tell. I'm surprised, but the ad revenues seem to be very good. That's why I say I may change my mind about posting more of my own work. I was fortunate to find this place.