Raivick |
Date Joined: Feb. 5, 2008
Last Login: Feb. 12, 2009 |
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6 Comments by Raivick
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Raivick 5 years, 2 months ago
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Aaaaawesome.....:) |
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Raivick 5 years, 2 months ago
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You write this right before you went home?....lol |
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Raivick 5 years, 2 months ago
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Gracious :) |
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Raivick 5 years, 2 months ago
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Good story and developement of characters. The only thing I see that could be different is limiting the use of commas in some sentences. There are a few other small things, but you should discover them as you continue on. |
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Raivick 5 years, 2 months ago
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awwwww right |
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Raivick 5 years, 3 months ago
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Bravo....I see why it's the only chapter with a five star rating. Good luck in the future... |
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8 Chapters by Raivick
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3.9/5.0 - published Feb 26, 2008 - 1 comment (preview)
Is this just another homicide investgation, or is there something more sinister lurking within the shadows of this mansion?
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3.8/5.0 - published Feb 23, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
A lone warrior travels up a mountain that is said to hold great power, and great horror...
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3.9/5.0 - published Feb 17, 2008 - no comments (preview)
I know it's supposed to be fictional stories only, but I wrote this poem long ago and wanted to share it...
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3.1/5.0 - published Feb 16, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story (preview)
An effort to continue an awesome story...
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4.3/5.0 - published Feb 05, 2008 - no comments (preview)
A neglectful daughter comes home to her fathers funeral to find herself rejected by her family.
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