Discussion of "Cry-baby Bridge : Metamorphosis" by Psycho1_77
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Cheeseliker 7 months ago
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Awesome twist there, showing this is actually one of the survivors telling the tale. Please finish this chapter, and I'm considering MASHing this myself. Not sure MASHing is the proper term...Anyway's, good stuff. |
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Psycho1_77 7 months ago
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Actually, if you go back to the beginning, that's how this tale started... I'm going to try to finish this in the next 24 hours or so... would love to see what you can bring to the table... |
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Cheeseliker 7 months ago
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Oh, must've missed that, will have to read through the whole story again so I don't miss any other details. |
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writerwannabe 7 months ago
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LOL..missed the boat mashing to solve Jake's escape but, damn you did that well!! The added twist of Jake's metamorphosis is intriquing, too. But, really it's the overall writing that is so superb. Suspense, horror, a bit of a love story, it's all there. Ausgezeichnet! (as they folks here in Deutschland would say...lol) |
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theblackhand 7 months ago
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Great story so far.... |
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honeygloom 6 months, 1 week ago
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The interludes with the Doc sort of bothered me actually. Now where's the fun, ya know. Now I know everybody dies. I mean, of course I assumed they would, but now there's nothing to root for, not even love since I know Baily's dead. I just think it complicates this story in a way that it doesn't need. I hope I didn't offend you or anything becuase beside the Doc I really like everything you've done. Effectively killing Jake by changing him is awesome and the way you handled it is great too. |
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