Discussion of "Puppet Master" by Psycho1_77

Egg must be one MESSED up guy. I loved the re-killing of Wright. Great detail and I can't get over how much energy it must have taken for a stoned Egg to behead someone with a knife... I guess you don't have to cut through the vertebrae though, you could probably just pop 'em out of place (I have actually no idea about that, it's just a guess). I love that Skeeter slept through the whole killing too. AND I love that Egg is in a very sticky situation now since there is a car from Shirley waiting downstairs for him, but he is with Bobby Sr... It'll be interesting to see who he pickes and how.
With that said, the first part is confusing me just a little. Help me out:
1- Egg and Frau killed one of Wright's guys to get the folders- How does that trace back to Bobby Sr?
2- If Bobby Sr. did set up the folders, how DID everyone land in MO? He must not have planned it as well as he thought. Especially since Toby had nothing to do with it and was on his was to Alaska until the accidental meeting with Angelique.
I haven't read the whole mash like twenty times or anything... really.
This all netted out to a four for me.

Yeah... I'm not really satisfied with it now that I have re-read it a couple times... I think I'm gonna lay off this story for a bit... get my ideas back in order... I have been focusing more on some of the other things I have on the table and I guess it's starting to show here...

No worries, I guess that's part of the fun and chalenge of something like this. Now all who continue get to try to link everything up. It's definitely a test of creativity. Should be fun:) I hope you come back soon!

Oh, I will... just trying to focus on finishing In a Nuts Hell and continuing Cry-baby Bridge

I suppose the lingering question here is "who's next?" Looks like Foo wanted to pen a subway chapter, which sounds great. Eleven's too prolific to let too many chapters go by without an entry. Honey's done the most installments, if I'm not mistaken (and I'm not counting). Me? I'll tackle a chapter Thursday. Let's see where it is by then.
-- Nash