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Discussion of "Demons that Always Haunt" by Psycho1_77


1 darkmatter 7 months ago Reply

Sorry for the late response Psycho1_77 just got home from Mexico, no no just kidding. Excellent job, great detail, I like the licking part, lol! You are heading towards my direction, great addition! I will take the next chapter and add more gruesome details of the past and maybe a big surprise, I'm not sure if it will be in this chapter.


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1 Psycho1_77 7 months ago Reply

Thank you... I was hoping that it would stay on track with your idea for the main character and just wanted to give a little depth as to how ****-up in the head he might be... I will keep an eye out for your next chapter..


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1 darkmatter 7 months ago Reply

Yes please keep a heads up, I will continue it and have it by tonight. Is their anything you would like for me to collaborate with you? please let me know.


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1 Psycho1_77 7 months ago Reply

well I'd like to know where you see things going with the main character... if he's going to slip in and out of lucidity, hover on the brink of madness, always keep his cool? I have an idea of how brutal I can make him when he's killing...


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1 darkmatter 7 months ago Reply

I will have a follow up chapter tomorrow, I'm sorry for the delay Psycho_77, but there is a fault in the story, there is a 1 year lapse, it must be covered, you see what I mean? We have to jump back and forth from 1 year ago to what is happening now. I'll have the next chapter tomorrow.


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1 Psycho1_77 7 months ago Reply

It'a all cool... just waiting to see where you want to go with it... I have enough to keep me busy for awhile...


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1 darkmatter 7 months ago Reply

I'm back Psycho_77, do your thing, if you like? Sorry for the delay. Chapter 4 "Gadgets'


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1 darkmatter 7 months ago Reply

It's chapter 5, sorry, enjoy!


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1 dogdeity11 6 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

Hey psycho...brutal man. just brutal.
loved it.


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