Discussion of "Mr. Manchego, come on down! You're the next contestant..." by Psycho1_77
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writerwannabe 3 years, 7 months ago
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Hey, Psycho...good to see you around here again. I'd thought theblackhand's project had died...glad to stumble on this and see that it hasn't. |
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Psycho1_77 3 years, 6 months ago
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TY... have gotten busy again... but will keep up with this.. got some ideas brewing... mwahhahahaha |
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theblackhand 3 years, 7 months ago
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Glad to see your working on something... |
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theblackhand 3 years, 3 months ago
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Hey Pyscho...nice job here man. Your descriptions and visuals are dead on. I hope to see a 2nd chapter soon, perhaps with more of an intensity of what Ramirez was capable of. Your right, he was sloppy and and didn't really have an MO, but he was brutal and without feelings, and that is what I hope that you will bring to the story. Lucifer chose Manchego and the others because he knew they were capable of commiting these horrible acts, and that is what I would like to see brought forth within your story. Your off to a great start. |
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Psycho1_77 3 years, 2 months ago
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I have been contemplating Manchego's transformation... I have some idea's that should please when the next chapter comes pouring out...lol |
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