Discussion of "The Fallen" by Proskate9

1		Proskate9 1 year, 11 months ago Reply If your leaving such low rating pleaze tell me why. I can not get any better if I do not know what im doing wrong. Please take in note this was one of the first stories I have written
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1		alharris 1 year, 11 months ago Reply Welcome to SM. FYI, no one has voted. The system starts you out with a zero. I suggest that you always vote for your own work. Don't be shy. Also, ask the SM gods to edit out the format gobbledeegoop. Be careful copy and pasting.
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1		yur1 1 year, 11 months ago Reply A lot of effort into one paragraph. Keep it up.
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