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The Fallen  by Proskate9

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   As I walked up to the edge, everything seemed to freeze around me. The air went still and the crying stopped. The rain froze in mid air, its cold drops floating there waiting to start moving again. “I am sorry” A voice played in the back of my mind as I looked down into the what seemed a bottomless pit. “I am really sorry” Then came a sudden gentle breeze that tilted me over the edge and started the fall. The rain seem to start up again, the cries turned to shouts of sorrow. I closed my eyes, falling down and down and down. Tears trickled down my cheeks and fell behind me. This was the end.

 

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Date created: March 1, 2010
Date published: March 1, 2010
Comments: 3
Tags: 1, 2, angel, chapter, clouds, crying, demise, fallen, fantasy, journey, scifi, the
Word Count: 155
Times Read: 128
Story Length: 1