want to participate?
login or register

Discussion of "The Talking Waves" by PrabeshChapagain


1 PEPPZ 5 years, 1 month ago Reply

Wow so many good stories today from Prabesh, writerwannabe and theblackhand. This was really excellent. The setting is really established well. It was like I could almost feel the heat of the pizza ovens on a summer afternoon. Anyone who's worked in a place like a pizzeria where customers come in and out I think can understand what it was like for the main character. I guess what really makes this excellent is that the main character's strong attraction to the woman he sees is set against a grueling and hot day of work.
4.5/ 5


  hidden comment from PEPPZ with score of 1
1 PrabeshChapagain 5 years, 1 month ago Reply

Thank you much for the comment...This was a first hand experience during the summer of 2005 while i was attending school for receiving my B.S in Psychology...I had initially thought who would like to read about the happenings of a Pizza shop...I am glad you liked it...


  hidden comment from PrabeshChapagain with score of 1
1 NishantPradhan 5 years, 1 month ago Reply

It really is a wonderful story...good plot.


  hidden comment from NishantPradhan with score of 1
1 AprilTurner 5 years, 1 month ago Reply

Wow it's a great story.It remainded me of my days when i used to work for a pizza store
When are you going to write the second chapter?
I look forward to reading what follows


  hidden comment from AprilTurner with score of 1
1 PrabeshChapagain 5 years, 1 month ago Reply

Thank you heartily for reading the chapter. I have the plot figured out, but i lack the time to continue. I have a day off tommorow, hopefully I will be able to write some more.

Thank you once again for reading........


  hidden comment from PrabeshChapagain with score of 1
1 Banita 5 years, 1 month ago Reply

Its very descriptive.I really got the feel of the pizza shop and felt as if i am personally experiencing it all.

---Ban


  hidden comment from Banita with score of 1
1 PrabeshChapagain 5 years, 1 month ago Reply

Thank you much for the comment banita. I appreciate it...


  hidden comment from PrabeshChapagain with score of 1
1 jill 5 years ago Reply

Hey prabesh!
this was a very unique kind of story and the plot was excellent. Keep up the good work man!


  hidden comment from jill with score of 1
1 Tupes 4 years, 11 months ago Reply

I have worked in a pizza place too. The story seem to exact happenings of a pizza shop.


  hidden comment from Tupes with score of 1
Add Comment