Discussion of "Dear Rhapsody Chapter III: Thy Justice Done, and Rightly So" by PoloniusFicklebottom

Wow! You all are fast and amazing writers! Poor Dee. Her writing dreams are over...

Poor Dee, poor Fran too it seems. Wonder who else Shotgun Eddy will go after...

Cool...short, dramatic and bloody! Ya gotta love it. But....there's room for so much more. Good job!

This was a turn for the worst I would have never expected. I absolutely loved it, the insanity involved the almost on the right path idea that the husband was in the right and then hes blasting with his shotgun. I love instant action as you can tell with Tommy Sincade.