Discussion of "Lost in Time (Part 1)" by Persephonie

Sorry I had to break thi up into two parts...I had too many characters to keep it all in one chapter. Hope you enjoy it! P.

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Wow. This was an excellent mash, Persephonie. You used all the key points of the previous chapter and really light a fire. I'm off to read part 2. 5 points on this one!

Thanks...I tried. :)

Sensational chapter (part1) Persephonie!
No worries about having to break it up. I think we have all been victims of the character limitations at some point.
You have done a really terrific job here taking advantage of the brutal last chapter by continuing to haunt us with it. There’s still a sense of mystery as to wheatear it really happened or if it’s just in his head. I got chills when I read the “Mmmm…Mornin’, Cowboy…” line. And I just got them again as I typed it out!
On to the second part. This one gets a five from me.

Glad someone enjoyed it! :)

I don't mind you breaking up your chapter at all especially if the secon part will be as good as the first. Bravo.

This..was..outstanding. The 1st time I ever read your work I was amazed. I am pleased with how you continued the story. Your writing talents shows. I WILL work with you again in the future.
Superb addition, superb...

thanks...it means alot coming from you!