Discussion of "Dark eyed Charm" by PenPaperPassion
JD_Renaissance 3 years, 5 months ago
Excellent writing. Beautiful descriptions. The ending felt just a tad rushed, but otherwise, well done.
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PenPaperPassion 3 years, 5 months ago
Sorry about that, I didn't know where I wanted to take the story. I was merely writing and then I hit a wall. Let's see if I can do better next chapter. :)
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writerwannabe 3 years, 5 months ago
Welcome to SM! Wow, this is quite a start to your "future" here...;o). I'll echo JD's comments and add that I loved it. Looking forward to more!
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