Discussion of "The Hiding Spot Between the Trees" by Paulsifer42

Wow,that was unpredictable...but i liked the suspense you created! *Thumbs up*

I agree.That WAS unpredictable...but it was good! :) i am looking forward to more of your stories! Keep up the good work!

Oh,just a teeny question? Why use a swear word? I know it must have suited the scenario but STILL! it just makes me uncomfortable.. :D
Sorry that's just my opinion but i wanted to know..

I go by the Stephen King rule which is: Be true to the character. I have a wonderful Mom, she is kind and loving and great, but if she accidentally hammers her finger, she yells "Double-Damn" that's what she yells, she doesn't yell "Darn" or "Fiddle-Stix." Writing that she yelled anything else A. Wouldn't be true to her, and therefore, B. Wouldn't sound right. I'm not a big fan of cussing either, and I don't like to hear it, but the person the dad was, in that setting, would have cussed, and I can't lie about that.

Couldn't agree more, Paulsifer.

It seems like people keep adding this (I thought it was implied by posting on here), anyone can write the next chapter, I'm really not sure if I'm going to.

Oh got it! :)
I wish there was a follow button so i could follow people. :(

I'm literally in the middle of writing an email about changing the site. I'm not sure how long I'll be on here if it stays this hard to navigate.

Lol! I tried another site.There were soooo many critiques that i came back -_-
Here people at least appreciate your work.But lets see,after complaints they might decide to add stuff to it!

I really want the site to have a healthy number of both critics and cheerleaders. I like to get better, but it's sure nice to hear that I'm awesome. :)

*critics -_-

Welcome to SM, Paulsifer42!

This was among the best 'new stories' from a new writer that I've read in a long time...;o). Awesome? Well, not quite; but certainly damned good writing.

Off to read another of yours!

Thank you. I really hope things start changing on this site. It seems full of really good writers (both talent wise and kindness wise), and like a place that I'd enjoy spending some time. This story was more to get a feel for the community. If things do get better, you can expect better from me.

I really like this a lot! I'm just nervous about adding another chapter, I think I have an idea, but... I donno. Great work, and great description, especially in Wills facial expressions, and emotions.

Don't get scrrd now! Add the next chapter. I wasn't really interested in completing the story myself, I want to see where people took it.

I have to say you kept me reading, because, I wonder what did he do. Just gave one little kiss and you can killed. I don't where your story takes place but good job.

I was kinda thinking back woods Montana, but honestly, backwoods anywhere would work. Write the next part, you tell me where it took place. (though I have a lot of stuff about Canada, so you'll have to keep that in mind