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"Death's right hand"

Chapter 2  by PatrickGibbs

"Not if I kill you first." said a little voice behind her.

****, she thought, though she secretly feared it would show up  only as red stars.

A three foot tall Hedehog wearing a pin striped suit stood behind her, weilding a switchblade. "You can't say ****, you know. It will only show up as little red stars."

"I didn't say it. I only thought it."she corrected him. "It's not my fault you're a telepath.

"Look what you did to Overdose. He was a decent guy. What did he ever do to you?" 

"He tried to rape me."

"Bitch, bitch bitch.That's all you can ever do."He growled."He made great chocolate chip cookiesandhe could sing like an angel. We shall not see his like again."

"What are you doing here, anyway, Hondo?"she demanded.

"The boss wants to see you." The Hedgehog sneered.


If this had been a movie, the camera would have dollied in on him. "In the next chapter."

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Date created: Jan. 7, 2008
Date published: Jan. 7, 2008
Comments: 1
Word Count: 216
Times Read: 394
Story Length: 1