PaigeDoyle |
Date Joined: Jan. 27, 2012
Last Login: May 27, 2012 |
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I'm just a girl who doesn't want to publish my stories in a book because I just don't have enough time. This is a hobby of mine and I want to be able to do it in between my busy life! I have started many stories that never get finished and this might get me motivated to get me to finish!
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17 Comments by PaigeDoyle
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PaigeDoyle 1 year ago
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I spelled title wrong... Whoops sorry! its supposed to be scared |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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??? Hahahaha ok?!?!?! |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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Try not truth... I should probably proof read my replies like I to with my stories. |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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Thank you for the feedback! I usually truth to put "characters name and I" in but I guess I didnt do that for this one very well haha. And I will do the paragraph thing in the 3rd chapter (I just put up the second just a heads up) and its ok to be picky! The picky people are the people who have helped make my favorite authors my favorite! Please be picky more! Haha but thank you anyway :) |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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well i have heard where prosecutors prosecute against lawyers when they know each other... i just don't think the jury can know anyone involved in the case because they are the ones determining the fate but otherwise i don't think it matters |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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Thank you! |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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This was so sad! Especially since he took his own life in order to be with her but he still didn't get to be with her :( but I still liked it! |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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I actually kind of liked this poem. It reminds me of the things me and my friends talk about when we really hate someone! Thanks for putting my feelings into a poem! It was well written! HAHA |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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I want to know what he says! haha please continue! |
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PaigeDoyle 1 year, 3 months ago
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I like the choice of song. The song sounds soft and it hits a lot of high and low notes. To me and its the perfect song to show people you can sing. If I could sing it would be a song that would be one of my choices! Adele has a strong voice and it's hard to copy that so to me by picking this song I see in my head a great singer shy on a school stage then finally letting her voice project with the audience awed! |
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5 Chapters by PaigeDoyle
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4.7/5.0 - published May 12, 2012 - 3 comments (preview)
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2.0/5.0 - published Jan 31, 2012 - no comments - start of story (preview)
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3.6/5.0 - published Jan 27, 2012 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
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2.1/5.0 - published Jan 27, 2012 - 4 comments (preview)
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2.1/5.0 - published Jan 27, 2012 - 3 comments (preview)
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