Discussion of "The Transient Horror (Revised)" by OrphicEgg
thamagnopen 5 years, 3 months ago
I read this story with my eyebrows down the whole way.
I'm glad you're here!
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DwayneHoover 5 years, 3 months ago
good first chapter. reminds me of a song, by peter gabriel, about a killer. can't think of the name. Also reminds me of the first time i read catcher in the rye, and i went out and killed that guy... oh sorry, pretend you didn't read that.
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hebe6405 5 years, 3 months ago
Great first paragraph, very engaging. Great overall too. It reminds me, in a strange way, of the song that Eponine sings in the Les Mis musical, "On my own."
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