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Discussion of "9: Three Weeks Left" by OriginalSim

1		writerwannabe 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply Very adept, OS! I love the yin-yang analogy playing in his head. I was a little confused with the Red Suit, White Suit but only until I read it three times..lol. Seriously, very well done. Fünf Punkte!
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1		OriginalSim 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply Thanks, writer! I tried Black Suit instead of Red Suit, but it just seemed better as Red - too confusing otherwise
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1		theblackhand 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply This was well written, well versed. You kept up with the ever-increasing deterioration that he was experiencing. I enjoyed it, especially this line: "Even within the tiniest fraction of our pathetic existence, we take sides and, at all costs, defend them to the extreme." Such a true statement.
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1		Persephonie 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply Eloquent...makes you think....
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1		Acee_Andrade 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply The many shades of Tony, very interesting! Bravo!
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1		honeygloom 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply Very unique! Nice job!
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1		abundantwater 4 months, 4 weeks ago Reply blackhand, not to change the subject but just wondering why some chapters are skipped?
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1		theblackhand 4 months, 3 weeks ago Reply None are skipped...what do you mean?
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1		dogdeity11 4 months, 3 weeks ago Reply wow man...amazingly creative. great job!
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1		Jackoalltrades 4 months, 2 weeks ago Reply Loved it. "I am Dichotomy." Great line. Well done, really well done.
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