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Discussion of "Chill!" by OriginalSim


1 ocmusicman 6 months, 2 weeks ago Reply

This is a very cool concept! I think you could go far with this.
I think you should "Show" her pains rather than telling them. Have her take a shower and feel the freezing cold droplets fall to her skin. Have her feeling the towel being drawn across her skin like a large blanket of ice.
That sort of thing.
Convey her pain through the character.
I really like this concept!
Good work!


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1 QuantasCylak 3 months, 3 weeks ago Reply

Another good one original sim! I love how you took it in a direction i wasn't even contemplating!


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