Discussion of "2 - Red's Blue Streak" by OriginalSim

I thought about how I'd critique ya
Go modern or bring back antique-ya
Your language and fashion
Are brilliantly smashin
It left me unable to speak-yeah.

Great continuation and setup. You done it proud.

Great now another fabulous chapter we all have to live up to... (lol) Can you ghostwrite mine? Loved the line at the beginning about Red being afraid of heights- brilliant! and the image at the end with pen on his face hahahaha!
Chloe

Great Job Original. Nice continuation...not much to comment on...as it was with the first chapter! Silver's up next!

not much to *critique* upon (sorry)...

Oh, I love it! Very nice work! I love how Red recruited Rhonda:) Old man's a genius!

Well, I'm proud to say that I didn't spend as much time agonizing over this as I thought I would.

Nash, I'm glad it works for you... I was terrified that it might only "not suck" ;o)

Chloe: I could (maybe) ghost write yours, but then we'd all miss your particular gifted style. Especially me!

Rock: Thanks! Comments / critiques - either are appreciated!

HG: Thanks! He's either a genius or crazy or both. Kinda like me. And I'm closer to his age than I like to remember. If I could remember. Eh.

Not only does it continue from the first chapter with style and grace, it mimes the style and grace of the first chapter beautifully, while spicing it further still with the touch of OriginalSim. The only critique I have comes in the form of the question: How am I supposed to follow this?

With aplomb? I have faith in your abilities...

... and thanks for the kind words!

I'm glad I got chapter 3. And you helped me very much by setting things up to go to auditions. I have material for auditions.