OriginalSim
Last Login: Dec. 29, 2008
190 Comments by OriginalSim
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OriginalSim 1 month, 1 week ago
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These wise string, bait to helipad emo nadirstand who(oy - simtoms) aholopadoski ocellos fool look samnoa ???????????????????????? |
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OriginalSim 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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Why thank you! I love writing this type of stuff just to see the Google Ad engine freak. Here's one from this tale: Reality is so not fair when it is funnier than fiction. |
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OriginalSim 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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I hate myself for doing this. |
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OriginalSim 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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I think that's "apathy is the mother of perspiration", but don't quote me on that. Ah, what the heck. Go ahead and quote me on that... |
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OriginalSim 1 month, 2 weeks ago
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I have to complain about the unusual speed and apparent attention to detail on this one. If I had my way, the story would have continued in a more or less exactly similar way. Only I would have had you write it, bpw, which of course you did. And then there is the characterization. What were you thinking? They are exactly as they should be, much to my irritation. I expected much less from you, I'm afraid. I have no choice but to give you a low 4.5. So, now I'll go and plot the next chapter after the one after this one. Which next hasn't been written as of this writing, and so I must strive to anticipate the next author's chapter in order to fulfill my goal. |
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OriginalSim 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Wow... talk about ramping it up! Excellent! |
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OriginalSim 1 month, 3 weeks ago
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Well, I hope it ends up being the middle of the book, anyway... it's currently the end of the book (hint, hint, people). I'm sorry about the asides - I do that way too much (I do really try to limit it [as much as I can] but fail miserably) and it can be distracting. I tried to infuse it with as much Doug Adams as I could, and fell very far short, but am glad that there is at least a hint of him - so thanks for that! Enjoy the rest of the story - I know you'll be pleased! Those other authors rock!!!!! |
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OriginalSim 2 months ago
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Sorry for barging in, but I couldn't pass this one up in much the same feverish way I would pass on peanut buttered popcorn. |
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OriginalSim 2 months, 1 week ago
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Been working this up over the last 6 weeks or so - shows how little time I really have. Thought it was ready enough to throw out to all you talented people!!!! |
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OriginalSim 3 months, 1 week ago
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Hmmm. I don't think I like Sherman at all, but probably not for the same reasons as Red and Rhonda don't not like him. I've met him. I hate him. But, this isn't about him. It's really about how great a job Silver did, which she did, and it was definitely worth waiting for!! Kudos! |
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75 Chapters by OriginalSim
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4.2/5.0 - published Nov 23, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
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4.3/5.0 - published Nov 07, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
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3.3/5.0 - published Oct 27, 2008 - 2 comments (preview)
More tales from Onionville - tales of a New York transplant to Missouri
Tags: humor, missouri, new, onionville, york |
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4.7/5.0 - published Sep 13, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story
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4.0/5.0 - published Jul 22, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Jul 10, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Jul 09, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Jun 23, 2008 - 10 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Jun 21, 2008 - 22 comments (preview)
A total of twelve encounters were recorded by explorers between 1962 and 2008. All incidents were in the western section of Mongolia, in the Bayan-Ölgii aimag, or province.
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3.9/5.0 - published May 24, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.3/5.0 - published May 21, 2008 - 6 comments - start of story
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3.5/5.0 - published May 17, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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"!!!" by OriginalSim
3.1/5.0 - published May 09, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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2.8/5.0 - published May 04, 2008 - 3 comments
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3.5/5.0 - published May 03, 2008 - no comments
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3.8/5.0 - published May 03, 2008 - 3 comments
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3.5/5.0 - published May 02, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published Apr 28, 2008 - 17 comments - start of story (preview)
family secrets ghosts revolutionary war and murder
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4.3/5.0 - published Apr 26, 2008 - 7 comments - start of story (preview)
sadness
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 23, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story (preview)
In which the mystery of the shadow deepens....
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1.9/5.0 - published Apr 19, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Apr 01, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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1.9/5.0 - published Mar 26, 2008 - 2 comments
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1.1/5.0 - published Mar 24, 2008 - 1 comment
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 23, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 23, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 23, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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"42" by OriginalSim
3.4/5.0 - published Mar 23, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Mar 23, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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"A Depressed, Psychotic Philosopher's Truthful Philosophy (with apologies to Desian)" by OriginalSim
3.3/5.0 - published Mar 22, 2008 - 11 comments - start of story
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3.5/5.0 - published Mar 20, 2008 - 8 comments
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 19, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 17, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story
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4.6/5.0 - published Mar 16, 2008 - 8 comments
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 15, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Mar 12, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Mar 12, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 12, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.9/5.0 - published Mar 11, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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4.2/5.0 - published Mar 10, 2008 - 4 comments
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3.5/5.0 - published Mar 09, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Mar 09, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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"The Best Possible Things To Say In Situations Where Everything Sucks And Is Out Of Control." by OriginalSim
2.5/5.0 - published Mar 06, 2008 - 3 comments
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3.6/5.0 - published Mar 02, 2008 - no comments
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3.8/5.0 - published Mar 01, 2008 - 8 comments
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3.2/5.0 - published Mar 01, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.6/5.0 - published Feb 25, 2008 - 8 comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Feb 24, 2008 - 2 comments - start of story
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4.1/5.0 - published Feb 24, 2008 - 4 comments - start of story
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3.3/5.0 - published Feb 24, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Feb 24, 2008 - 3 comments - start of story (preview)
or, "The Tale Tell Balls"
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4.0/5.0 - published Feb 23, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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3.7/5.0 - published Feb 22, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Feb 21, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.4/5.0 - published Feb 16, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.4/5.0 - published Feb 14, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Feb 09, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Feb 09, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Feb 09, 2008 - 5 comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Feb 08, 2008 - no comments
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3.6/5.0 - published Feb 05, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Feb 02, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Feb 01, 2008 - 2 comments
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3.6/5.0 - published Jan 31, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Jan 30, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Jan 26, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.0/5.0 - published Jan 26, 2008 - no comments (preview)
"Drug free writings since 1970. Guaranteed!"
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3.4/5.0 - published Jan 25, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.5/5.0 - published Jan 24, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Jan 18, 2008 - 1 comment - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Jan 17, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.8/5.0 - published Jan 16, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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4.4/5.0 - published Jan 15, 2008 - 6 comments
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3.4/5.0 - published Jan 14, 2008 - no comments - start of story
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3.6/5.0 - published Jan 14, 2008 - 1 comment
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