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OriginalSim

Date Joined: Jan. 14, 2008
Last Login: Dec. 29, 2008

190 Comments by OriginalSim

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1 OriginalSim 1 month, 1 week ago Context

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2 OriginalSim 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

Why thank you!

I love writing this type of stuff just to see the Google Ad engine freak. Here's one from this tale:
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Reality is so not fair when it is funnier than fiction.


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1 OriginalSim 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

I hate myself for doing this.


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1 OriginalSim 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

I think that's "apathy is the mother of perspiration", but don't quote me on that. Ah, what the heck. Go ahead and quote me on that...


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3 OriginalSim 1 month, 2 weeks ago Context

I have to complain about the unusual speed and apparent attention to detail on this one. If I had my way, the story would have continued in a more or less exactly similar way. Only I would have had you write it, bpw, which of course you did. And then there is the characterization. What were you thinking? They are exactly as they should be, much to my irritation. I expected much less from you, I'm afraid. I have no choice but to give you a low 4.5. So, now I'll go and plot the next chapter after the one after this one. Which next hasn't been written as of this writing, and so I must strive to anticipate the next author's chapter in order to fulfill my goal.


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2 OriginalSim 1 month, 3 weeks ago Context

Wow... talk about ramping it up! Excellent!


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2 OriginalSim 1 month, 3 weeks ago Context

Well, I hope it ends up being the middle of the book, anyway... it's currently the end of the book (hint, hint, people). I'm sorry about the asides - I do that way too much (I do really try to limit it [as much as I can] but fail miserably) and it can be distracting.

I tried to infuse it with as much Doug Adams as I could, and fell very far short, but am glad that there is at least a hint of him - so thanks for that!

Enjoy the rest of the story - I know you'll be pleased! Those other authors rock!!!!!


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1 OriginalSim 2 months ago Context

Sorry for barging in, but I couldn't pass this one up in much the same feverish way I would pass on peanut buttered popcorn.


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1 OriginalSim 2 months, 1 week ago Context

Been working this up over the last 6 weeks or so - shows how little time I really have. Thought it was ready enough to throw out to all you talented people!!!!


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2 OriginalSim 3 months, 1 week ago Context

Hmmm. I don't think I like Sherman at all, but probably not for the same reasons as Red and Rhonda don't not like him. I've met him. I hate him.

But, this isn't about him. It's really about how great a job Silver did, which she did, and it was definitely worth waiting for!! Kudos!


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