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Onaiza123	Date Joined: July 5, 2011 Last Login: Aug. 1, 2011

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1		Onaiza123 1 year, 9 months ago Context Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it and thanks for your feedback, it's appreciated. I will definitely will make my other stories better, and put in the stuff you've told me.
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1		Onaiza123 1 year, 10 months ago Context Loved it ! This such a good story.:) I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep it up. :) ~ Onaiza
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1		Onaiza123 1 year, 10 months ago Context No problem. :)
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1		Onaiza123 1 year, 10 months ago Context Great story ! Very exciting to read (: Maybe you could improve by saying what Emily enjoy's doing as a normal teenager? Like her hobbies, reading, sports etc. So readers can see the other side of her too, not just that she is just a shape shifter. Overall great story ! Very interesting and eventful to read. Can't wait for the next chapter :) Keep it up. :) ~ Onaiza
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1 Chapter by Onaiza123

"The Taxi Driver." by Onaiza123

2.0/5.0 - published Jul 05, 2011 - 4 comments (preview)

I was walking all by myself. Alone, in the darkness. All I could hear was the dry leaves crunch underneath my foot. The wind was rustling through the trees around me...
Tags: driver, taxi