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"The Pain of Love"

LOST MY SMILE  by OliverSuddan73

So, So, sorry!

 I just finished reading your poetry, and it hurts me to feel your misery!

 If I'm correct, sounds like you also got done dirty? I can relate probably better than anybody.

 With all do respect and honesty, you need to get over this person very quickly, your mentality needs to be yelling

"he's not worthy."

The fact that you ware his shirt to sleep baffles me and bothers me!

 If it was my shirt, you would have me permanently, you would never in a million years, to any stretch of your imagination, write this kind of poetry!

On the contrary, you would be consumed by my positive energy!

Please forgive me if this is rain on your parade, actually my intentions are to bring a bright rainbow to your gloomiest of days.

 We have to understand that some situations are momentary, not meant to be forever!

 Trust me I know its hard, but think out side the box, their is somebody that has been waiting, reading your writings, patiently anticipating for this opportunity!

 He considers him self your immortal smile, the one that replaces, hopefully you feel his message, and take this as medication, to forever heal your sadness...................

I also lost my smile and yet to find it!!!!

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Date created: April 4, 2009
Date published: April 4, 2009
Comments: 0
Tags: is, it, you
Word Count: 271
Times Read: 196
Story Length: 1