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Discussion of "SHELBY NEAR THE FLAME" by OXYGENBRAIIN


1 theblackhand 2 months, 1 week ago Reply

You tease here.
It is a good chapter, but you really haven't moved the story along. It probably would have been better if you had combined chapter 2 and 3 together.


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