Discussion of "G" by ORL13

Not sure what to make of the formatting...a screw up in the system or intentionally inserted? Hmmm.

The one paragraph that was completely legible established a great mystery and set the stage well, I think. I'm curious to see where this goes..;o)

how much fun was this? lots...thats how much.
I thought the wild formatting, (intentional or not), really added to the mystery. It was very Terminator.

Thanks for the feedback guys. Yeah storymash fooled with the formatting a bit, but I was going for an old DOS computer command prompt look. I've been playing an old computer game lately that deals with hacking and conspiracies and it inspired me to write this

Formatting worked for me. I thought the effect was awesome and really added to the mystery. Nice work!

Thanks honeygloom. I really appreciate that coming from you!