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Discussion of "G" by ORL13


1 writerwannabe 2 years, 1 month ago Reply

Not sure what to make of the formatting...a screw up in the system or intentionally inserted? Hmmm.

The one paragraph that was completely legible established a great mystery and set the stage well, I think. I'm curious to see where this goes..;o)


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1 dogdeity11 2 years, 1 month ago Reply

how much fun was this? lots...thats how much.
I thought the wild formatting, (intentional or not), really added to the mystery. It was very Terminator.


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1 ORL13 2 years, 1 month ago Reply

Thanks for the feedback guys. Yeah storymash fooled with the formatting a bit, but I was going for an old DOS computer command prompt look. I've been playing an old computer game lately that deals with hacking and conspiracies and it inspired me to write this


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1 honeygloom 2 years, 1 month ago Reply

Formatting worked for me. I thought the effect was awesome and really added to the mystery. Nice work!


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1 ORL13 2 years, 1 month ago Reply

Thanks honeygloom. I really appreciate that coming from you!


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