Discussion of "Untold Tales of Doomed Henchemen" by ORL13

I like this, the action is hot, but I found it a little confusing. Your second installment is a bit more human, but I do appreciate what you're doing here, this is meant to be pure action. Still, I have to rate it a little lower than chapter two on principal. I seldom deal out less than a 3 ("not bad at all") so I'm giving this a 3.

good action. I really liked your dedication at the beginning and the 'chapter 0.'

Thanks guys. Yeah, this chapter is supposed to be kind of dumbed down. A mac-10 and grenade launcher is a highly impractical combination of weapons. I was going for that mindless bloodbath movie scene vibe.

Interesting vibe to go for. It worked!!!