Novel-Ambition
Last Login: July 17, 2008
12 Comments by Novel-Ambition
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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With a grain of salt... I thought it was well structured, though not my favorite. |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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I gave this considerable thought, and while the storyline is endearing and nicely done… I’m afraid it’s not for me. |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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Great opening. This story has a web of possibilities… |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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Intriguing tone… I’d definitely read another chapter. And while I tend to agree with Katrina on sentence structure, there are certain descriptive elements that unite the overall story. |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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The idealistic language rings a true-to-life feel that I really enjoyed. |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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'Not dirty, just tussled'… gives a lasting impression, and with its fresh urban-esque vibe, I can almost hear the voice of the city. |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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Funny! And the 'keen as mustard' bit was great! |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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Sometimes, one plate is all you need... I really enjoyed this chapter. It's relatively concise, leaving a plethora of possibility. And I believe on many levels, the evocative feelings Carmen expresses, is at times, universal. |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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Tedium of workforce doldrums and afterlife… nice combination. |
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Novel-Ambition 6 months, 1 week ago
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Enjoyed this chapter, and the figurative comparison... "It didn't make up for their architectural sins..." |
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