Discussion of "Don't Do It" by Norcia

This is a really awesome piece. Try to make a story with a twist at the end to make the readers want to know more

Thank you so much! Hmmm...I will have to see what I can come up with. Thanks for the input.

i like the very last couple lines the most, "if you don't who will." i like them because ive heard that before... that saying, "if you dont like urself then how do u expect anyone to like u?"
i dont even remember who said it to me? i wish i did. id thank them for it.
another really great poem.

Thanks! I've heard something like that before, too...that if you don't respect yourself, then no one else will either.