All Comments by Nona
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Nona 1 year, 1 month ago
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Whoa! That was insane! Kept me reading, feasting on every word. Definetly want to see how far it will go! |
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Nona 1 year, 1 month ago
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I wrote this as an english assignment. It didn't take to long but I spent a lot of time editing it and trying to perfect it. It still has a long way to go and I need some help with making it better. I need as much critism as possible from anyone. I don't care if it's good or bad, just give me some ideas and so on. |
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Nona 1 year, 1 month ago
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I wrote this as an english assignment. It didn't take to long but I spent a lot of time editing it and trying to perfect it. It still has a long way to go and I need some help with making it better. I need as much critism as possible from anyone. I don't care if it's good or bad, just give me some ideas and so on. |
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