Ha, wow. I didn't actually anyone would have commented on it (went uncommented for at least a month or so.)
Glad I decided to check the site now though. XD

Things are going okay. Ups and downs. You know, the usual. Haven't been putting my more recent works on here.

and thanks. ^_^

Hey, haven't really put much on here in a long time.
However, I have been writing some short stories lately. If you would like to read and comment, please check out my Deviantart account.
http://slithering-shadow.deviantart.com
And hey, feel free to mention that you're from Storymash. (Probably won't be on here much after this post.)

Thanks.
Well, to be honest, I kinda wrote it about how I've been feeling a lot in the past months.
The exact nature of the conflict and such weren't supposed to be included. The major point is just that his friends and family pretty much just settled for the old, "Everything's fine" scenario even though it obviously wasn't. So, he just kinda decided to let himself die if his friends and family didn't care, or to let himself be saved if they did care and actually came to him.

Finally added another chapter to Brother's Keeper.

Lol.
To be honest, it doesn't seem nearly as bad as high school.
My problem is that I'm a procrastinator and I always put my friends, more importantly, the girl I like, first on my list of priorities. So...school work often gets left until the last minute.

Hey. Thanks.

And yeah, I looked yesterday after reading this comment. Haven't really had much time to get on here recently and read anything. College and all. >.<

Ah. Lol. Well, thanks for the history lesson (and no, that's not sarcasm. ^_^ )

And I didn't take it as an attack. Hey, what did I know? All I knew was that it was a pope, so...religious. After all, I didn't write the first chapter and that person didn't even know how to go on with the story. I just thought off the top of my head. Didn't think the person was basing any of it off of real (or semi-real) people. XD (Which is why I saw no point of doing research cuz..well, I thought it was pure fiction. Lol. Oh well. What's done is done eh? Now I'll just roll with it, I suppose. If I ever continue the story. XD )

Lol.
Well, the room is just that. It's just a room inside the church that only the Pope can open. Just a secret room no one knows about. Nothing too special or cryptic. Lol.
And uh, yeah, I don't really know when it's supposed to take place. I'm just writing it as I go. But, since there's medicine and most likely doctors, I would just say the present probably. But, maybe in a somewhat secluded area. Haven't decided since there's been nothing about the outside of the place yet.
Oh, and "what the brother is" for now is a mystery. Even to me. XD
And uh, Pope John Paul? (I'm feeling really dumb right now and am certain I'll feel dumber when you tell who he is. Lol)

Yeah. Idk. Still haven't really decided. Haven't had much time to think. Have a test tomorrow that I know NOTHING for. V,V

And yeah, I was thinking about the religious part. And how in the other guy's first chapter it said something bout the document being able to destroy the foundation of teh church.
That's why I thought some freaky angel vampire type thing. Cuz, it seems somewhat blasphemous, in a way. After all, it's not like church people would really be vampire supportors. lol. and for the pope to be the one that made the blasphemous creatures...well, yeah.

Well, I won't be posting it on here. I only wanted to post the first chapter to see what people thought of it. Did it on facebook, too.

And it's kind of a different spin on paranoia. Not exactly the way most would think of it.
Pretty much, and I would say that this is ruining it, but it's not really, since I'm not putting it on here. The girl is living a fairly normal life. But then she starts feeling weird and a bit paranoid. and she starts seeing a doctor, people tell her she's crazy, etc.
But in the end, she finds out that paranoia was the only thing making her sane. Paranoia caused her to think that people were there when they weren't. So, she finally realizes that she is all that's there. There's no one else. That kind of loneliness drives her over the edge, so...she commits suicide. Most likely by cutting her wrists open, as foreshadowed by the first chapter.