What?

Ahhhh, I see. Thanks for clearing that up for me :)!

I've been really curious, What the heck is "Children Rank" and "Descendent Rank"?
NeoShaolin47

I really liked this. Your history of the universe is very colorful and spiritual, reminding me of something akin to an old Native American tale. Has very few writing errors, and is written with a smooth flow and enticing style. Well done! (Maybe there's more? I'd be curious to see if the moon-or fire-decides to have more power over earth, or maybe attack chicken-hehe.)
NeoShaolin47

Nice one, JD. I especially liked the comparison to black opals, really puts a clear picture in your head. I'm kind of curious to find out what this is. Reminds me of Carnage or Venom for some reason, like it's going to spread over her body like a suit. Ok, I'm really curious :). Great Job.
NeoShaolin47

Awesome! I'd really love for someone to mash something of mine :. Thank you!
NeoShaolin47

Hehehehe, thanks WWB, you treat me too well :)
NeoShaolin47

Hehehehe, the 10 min time limit kind of killed me :P. Am I allowed to continue it though? I was confused about that...
NeoShaolin47

I hoped So, thanks :) Honey!
NeoShaolin47

AWESOME, I love it! My cup of tea, definitely. Grim, morbid but with a touch of vengeance: Delicious. My only gripe is that it was a little choppy, btu that's a VERY small gripe. Well done!
NeoShaolin47