Discussion of "Falling" by NateG

Well, hopefully this doesn't offend, I found it rather amusing to write.

If anyone is interested, I thought it'd be a good concept to write about the same series of events from the viewpoints of different passengers/crew. Cheers.

Oh, and I must have already offended somebody... 1 star? Really? ;)

I liked it. Especially the sexist cad. I want to hear a story about him. You created some good angst about the drops, and falling, but it could have been so much more complex if he attempted a mile hi with the dime a dozen.

it was a unique way of writing I liked it check out mine the highway by philly1 thanks

I enjoyed the story... we are not all princes and sweethearts, right? ;)

I sure would like to write it from another point of veiw, if you don't mind.

Please do!!

I enjoyed the perspective NateG. dropped in to read your stuff I like how you write keep up the good work.
Oh, if you don't mind would enjoy your thoughts about my new addition to in the shroud of shadow (part3). Any comments are welcome.
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