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Discussion of "A Penny for Your Thoughts Ch. 2" by Nate

1		npollack 12 months ago Reply I appreciate your critique even more now that I have read some of your writing. I love that you have taken the time to write carefully - to spell correctly, punctuate, craft a sequence of events. Excellent.
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1		Remus661 12 months ago Reply Hahaha! I love it! I had no idea what you were doing with the story until the very end! Great job!
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1		rollingthunder 11 months, 3 weeks ago Reply We meet the husband, but aren't told specifically that he killed his wife; all we know for sure is that he is on the run.
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1		rollingthunder 11 months, 3 weeks ago Reply This is a logical progression from the first chapter. Nicely done.
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