The Love Storyb (draft) by NannahKay
One day Amy was going to school, she wanted the day to go by fast because when she got home she got to ride her horse Commanchie.Commanchie is a new horse Amy's daddy Mr.Ponder bought for her.Amy and her family lived on a big ranch in Minnesota they had a family of three.The only family she had was Mr. and Ms. Ponder,Amy was an only child.Amy has some ups and downs but she makes everything work out fine.Amy had a great family and a great life.Amy thought she had more family cause she counted her horses as her brothers and sisters.She rode her horse everyday then her family needed some ranch help so they hired a teenager named Dewayne.Amy was a teen herself.When Amy got home from school she saw Dewayne and fell head over hills for him.Dewayne has short brown hair and brown eyes.Dewayne worked for them every other day of the week he had a great job on the farm he got payed every Friday for what he did during the week.Then Amy went inside and took a bath then went to sleep.Then when Amy went to school the next day she found out her and Dewayne went to the same school.Amy was sitting in class waiting for the bell to ring so school will be over.Only reason Amy couldn't wait to get home was because she got to talk to the guy of her dreams Dewayne and she couldn't wait to ride Commanchie,five minutes later the bell had rang to go to next period which was lunch then she will go home after lunch.Amy went to eat lunch the school was having pizza with corn and milk.So Amy went and ate when she got done she went home.On the way home she found out that Dewayne rode her bus, she was so happy that Dewayne sat with her.They didn't say a word on the ride home but, when they got home they talked alot about horses.Then when they got done talking Dewayne had to go work and Amy went to go ride Commanchie. Then when they got done they talked some more but, the subject wasn't about horses anymore it was about them two getting to know each other.Dewayne asked Amy if he could take her out on a date at the restaurant called "The Crambulae" a famous and exspensive restaurant.Amy said "sure"then they started talking about what time he will pick her up.Then Amy was anxious to know what day and time it was gonna be.Then it was time for Dewayne to go home so he said bye.The next day at school Amy's friends had heard a rumor about Dewayne likes Amy and she said "really?" and they said"yea"then she said that she likes him to.So when Amy told her friends that she liked Dewayne they said they were gonna go hook them up then she said ok then.Things went weird that afternoon at home for Amy and Dewayne when they got home Dewayne asked Amy if she really liked him and she said yea and so they started dating.Then the day of their date came November21,2009 from 12:00 am to 2:00 pm then they went and watched a movie.Then when they got home Dewayne had to go home and they said good night and left.Then the next day was the last day of school and they say bye and went home then he came back to Amy's house and gave her a kiss and they lived happily ever after.
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