Discussion of "Ghostwriter" by Nanadae
| 10 | njharman 4 years, 3 months ago Reply Wow, neat! The technology and process main character uses is exactly like what I imagine a far future version of StoryMash to be. So, cool. A high bar to reach for. I can't wait to see were this story leads. I'd have a try at it myself if I weren't so busy working on StoryMash. | |
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Blayzetan 2 years, 4 months ago
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comment my story plz? ill comment urs back! |
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Sunnie 4 years, 3 months ago
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Great read! I hope you post more |
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innerspacecase 4 years, 2 months ago
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Lots of potential here! I especially like the Frankenstein's monster aspect of the text that the narrator creates. As appropo as the desperation that fills both this narrator and Dr. F. |
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soozezip 4 years, 1 month ago
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Suddenly, Oingo Boingo lyrics dancing in my head - "it's my creation...is it real?" Good job, N! |
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KatofTroy 3 years, 10 months ago
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I like the sensitivity here. I could see her relief. |
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Jackoalltrades 3 years, 9 months ago
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It felt like a writer in some MMORPG...it was unreal. But I really enjoyed the style and flow of the story. |
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PangeLingua 3 years, 9 months ago
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Just read it on April 19. Could it be that nobody has added a chapter? Hmmmm... This is well-written and compelling. If it were the first chapter of a novel sitting on the book store shelf, I'd have had to buy it. |
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webrockweb 3 years, 9 months ago
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was a really wonderful story. you probaly put alot off effort in to it. |
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Berlingirl 3 years, 7 months ago
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I like ur style...Thank you..great reading you. |
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jing 2 years, 2 months ago
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I like it too. |
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meggyheaddy 1 year, 3 months ago
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I like your story. It's really good! And it's the first chapter I ever read on Story Mash haha |
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iSnickers 10 months, 2 weeks ago
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Beautiful, but I'm confused. Who's her mate? |
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MgSpring96 7 months ago
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It was nice but is it a boy or a girl? |
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terelyn 6 months, 3 weeks ago
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Cool writing! |
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