Discussion of "Night Owl (continued)" by MysticPen

-1		icepulse 9 months, 4 weeks ago Reply I see this story as metaphorically describing (in noir-ish language) a scumbag; a hustler. Someone who operates after dark, and comes on with a snake-oil charm, then screws you over. Feel free to change the format back and forth between verse and prose as you see fit, but try to grasp the metaphor.
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1		MysticPen 9 months, 4 weeks ago Reply no problem... that is the same thing I imagined ;)
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1		philly1 9 months, 4 weeks ago Reply Cool story, can you check out the story trapped then read from the beginning and vote on trapped. thanks
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