All Comments by MysticPen

LOVE IT!!!! Thanks for continuing! :)

no problem... that is the same thing I imagined ;)

I enjoyed the story... we are not all princes and sweethearts, right? ;)

oops ignore that note... wrong window...

I'm not certain how this continues the first story.

Great story, however, I have to agree with norm. I got confused here and there. It’s always difficult to take criticism, but it can improve you work if you are open to it. The story is awesome. It would be even better if you could work on grammar and your presentation technique.

Nice descriptions!

Great situation... hehe... I think I've seen it before somewhere... er from the gal's perspective. Any why, increasing your font size and choosing a Sans Serif would help us nearly blind folks. :P

Nice continuation. This would be easier to read if you add some paragraph and line breaks.

Thanks for the comment!