"a noticeable vodka wobble"... enough said. You have a spice to your writing. It's uniquely desciptive. I would have never thought of that...possibly because I prefer whiskey or soco ;)

Thank you again.

Thank you very much. It's nice to know some people are enjoying what I write.

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. Thanks for the feedback. I hope you enjoy where it goes from he, once I figure out exactly where that will be.

I appreciate the feed back, I'm glad you enjoyed it. As for the honesty, bravery or creativity conundrum...well I believe it's a bit of all three.

This is a fantastic begining wrought with possible continuations. I've just started on this site and am going to make my first attempt at the continuation of another's work with this. Hope you're at least not offended by where I go. I have a penchant for surprise and the outlandish

I am new to this site. This was just a little humorous thing that I dreamt up.I'm not sure if comment is a joke or an insult, either way I believe your beligerence is unwarranted. I kindly ask you to please limit your comments to constructive critism. I do not blame you for qestioning my sanity, however I do not think anyone who suggests a Kit-Kat bar as a solution to mental illness has any right to be pointing fingers when it comes to madness. So again please try to be constructive. Thanks.